Tuesday 19 April 2016

Second Draft: Audience Feedback

Positives:
  • Good editing during the kidnapping
  • Split screen
  • Original idea
  • Decent first draft
  • Black and whit
  • Made some improvements
Negatives:
  • Possibly change titles to white instead of black
  • Keep titles on one clip
  • Loud wind
  • Add ambient sound
  • Possibly make the establishing shot shorter

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