Second Draft: Audience Feedback

Positives:

• Good editing during the kidnapping
• Split screen
• Original idea
• Decent first draft
• Black and whit
• Made some improvements

Negatives:

• Possibly change titles to white instead of black
• Keep titles on one clip
• Loud wind
• Add ambient sound
• Possibly make the establishing shot shorter

First Draft: Audience Feedback

Positives:

• Good editing during the kidnapping
• Split screen
• Original idea
• Decent first draft
• Black and white

Negatives:

• Titles are sometimes not visible
• Keep titles on one clip
• Loud wind
• Music climaxes before the visual climax